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Monday 27 August 2018

Aces B Reading.

WALT: use my prior knowledge, along with the information in the text.
We are learning to use my prior knowledge.

Ways on how to stay healthy and fit: Writing Week 6 Task.

WALT: review what we remember in explanation writing.

Explanation writing: Explain ways in which we can keep healthy.

Introduction: Hi if you want to keep fit and healthy you want to keep fit and healthy then you came to the right place. Let me ask you a question. What would you choose. Fries or Fruits? Cupcake or Apple? They real answer you should pick is Fruits and an apple. Because you want to be healthy.

Paragraph 1: Eat your fruit. You have to eat your fruit to stay healthy because you can have a favourite fruit. My favourite fruit is Apples. So you can have a favourite fruit. Fruit is good for you heath.

Paragraph 2: Eat your vegetables. You always have to remember that you have to eat your vegetables not just your fruits. Make sure you eat 50% of you fruits and 50% of you vegetables.

 Paragraph 3: You have to make sure you exercise to keep fit. If you want some tips on how to stay fit then I have some for you. When you want to do something and your doing nothing then you can go for a walk to the beach or you can run have a swim. You can also walk on the beach or run on the beach. 

Paragraph 4: You have to stretch before you go for a run or workout at the gym then you can stretch your arms before you start or When you have a game of rugby of when you have training then you definitely need to stretch be if you don’t your get sore legs and arms.

Conclusion: Thank you for listening to my Ideas on how to stay fit and healthy. Make sure you keep on looking on my blog to see what we have been up to in our classroom.

 Share it with a buddy. Get them to go through your writing and edit it. Check for correct use of punctuation Capital letters Does it make sense? Yes Leave positive and constructive comments Answer the following questions: What is this explanation about? Talking about how to keep fit and healthy. What is the main point in paragraph one? Eating your fruits. What is the main point in paragraph two? Eating your vegetables. What is the main point in paragraph three? Running or walking. What is the main point in paragraph four? Stretching.

We are learning to review what we remember in explanation writing.

Writing Task: Week 5.

WALT: use interesting words and ideas in our writing.
We are learning to use interesting words and ideas in our writing.

Underground Adventures: Aces B Week 5.

WALT: identify and explain how the main idea and supporting information relate to the author's purpose and the intended audience.
 identify and explain how the main idea and supporting information relate to the author's.

My Book Review.

WALT: identify and explain how the main idea and supporting information relate to the author's purpose and the intended audience.
We are learning to Identify and explain how the main idea and supporting information relate to the author's.

Tuesday 14 August 2018

Explanation Template : My idea of Perseverance

WALT: Write with perseverance.
My idea of Perseverance
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
T
Title - What you will be explaining
I
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I
Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title
My idea of perseverance
Introduction
Do you know how perseverance works? Well if you don’t then you came to the right place. I’m going to make a list of things that are to do with perseverance and how it works:
Never Giving up, Trying something new,
Believe in yourself, and your Attitude.
So keep on reading to find something you have never heard.
Information
1st element
Are you giving up most of the time? Well you should never give up because if you do you won’t know something if you keep on giving up. I'll tell you a little thing or 2 about never giving up.
The first one is don’t be shy to ask for help because,
if you ask for help you will understand more, second of all keep on going by never giving up.
Information
2nd element
If you have never tried something new that means you haven't learnt that much, but that doesn’t mean that your dump,
it means try something new so you can learn something new.
So you should try something new most of the time.



Information
3rd element
When you want to play with your friends and someone ask you if they can play, what happens if you say NO? So if you say no then you don’t really care about others,
But that’s not the answer look what would happen if you say. If you say NO! they will feel sad and left out but we don’t want that to happen right?
So if someone ask you if they can play with you and your friends say Yes! and help them out.





Conclusion
Thank you to all of you out there for looking at my blog and reading My idea of perseverance.
I hope you have enjoyed my blog and reading this doc.





We are learning to use perseverance in our writing

Wednesday 8 August 2018

Monday 6 August 2018

Punctuation Worksheet.

WALT: use punctuation in our writing.

What is a period and when does it get used? A period is a full-stop and it gets used at the end of a sentence. Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a period. I went to the beach with my family. My dad went to the shop to get some ice cream. My brother and sister went to play on the park. What is a question mark and when does it get used? A question mark is a mark that you use if you want to ask a question, and it’s used at the end of a sentence when you ask a question. Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a question mark. How was your holidays? Do you want to go to the pools? Do you want a ride to school? What is a quotation mark and when does it get used? A quotation mark is also known as a speech marks and it’s used at the begging of a question and at the end. Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a quotation mark. “How was your swim?” “When did you get back?” “Do you want to go to the park?” What is a apostrophe and when does it get used? This is Lincoln’s PS4. Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a apostrophe. This is Trinity’s best friend. This is Santana’s flower. This is Rosaleen’s book. What is a comma and when does it get used? A comma is used for a little break when you run out of breath, and a comma gets used for when you run out of breath. Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a comma. I went to the shop to get, some ice cream We went to the park, played a lot, and played even more I needed to get these from the shop, Lollies, Milk, & Bread. What is a hyphen and when does it get used? used to join words to indicate that they have a combined meaning or that they are linked in the grammar of a sentence. Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a hyphen. I went to my family’s- Favourite beach. I went to my mum’s- Favourite job. I went to my dad’s- yard. What is a exclamation point and when does it get used? A exclamation point is when you want to yell out something you can yell it out and end with an exclamation point & a exclamation point is used when you what to yell or shout in a story. Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a exclamation point. I said AHHHHH! I yelled at the top of my lungs & cried! (Sentence 3) What is a colon and when does it get used? A colon is when you introduce something or do a list. A colon is used when you want to do a list. Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a colon. I had to get some things from the shop like: Bread, Milk, Chocolate, & Ice cream. I had to do some chores: Do the dishes, Do my room, and vacuum. My mum & dad went to the shop and got: Dish-washing soap. What is a parentheses and when does it get used? Parentheses are also known as brackets, and it’s used for explaining things for more use. Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a parentheses. There is a girl in my class (Daliz) that I played tag with. My friend (Rosaleen) went to the shop to get lollies. My Teacher (Ms Tuia) went to the bakery to buy a pie. What is a semicolon and when does it get used? A semicolon is a colon but it has something like a comma at the bottom, and it’s used to join two independent clauses. Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a semicolon. My friend was right in front of me; She was tall as. My mum & dad was standing next to me; they were massive. My sister compared her hands to mine; They were big.

We are learning to do punctuation is our writing.