Show Not Tell Part 2.

WALT: look at the features of an effective paragraph.

The Night Sky.

 1. The sky was pitch black but the stars were shining from the sky. The trees were black and the wind was blowing. The colour of the Star Struck was like a wave going along the sky. The colour was glancing in my eyes as I looked at it.

 The Sunset.

 2. As the sun was about to go down it slowly went down and the moon was coming up. The orange sunset was beautiful you could see it from somebody’s eyes. The sun went down and the moon came up the sky was orange and black with stars in the sky.

 The theme park.

 3. The theme park was filled with rides, The rockets went up down and all around. The Star bot cafe was filled with with yum food, Muffins, drinks, coffee, hot chocolate, and more yum things.

 The night Lightning sky.

 4. The sky was dark and the blue lightning struck the fence. The clouds were grey and the and lightning came out. The trees were black and the tree was burning hot and smoking.

We are learning to look at the features.