WALT: review what we remember in explanation writing.
Explanation writing: Explain ways in which we can keep healthy.
Introduction:
Hi if you want to keep fit and healthy you want to keep fit and healthy then you came to the right place. Let me ask you a question. What would you choose. Fries or Fruits? Cupcake or Apple? They real answer you should pick is Fruits and an apple. Because you want to be healthy.
Paragraph 1:
Eat your fruit. You have to eat your fruit to stay healthy because you can have a favourite fruit. My favourite fruit is Apples. So you can have a favourite fruit. Fruit is good for you heath.
Paragraph 2:
Eat your vegetables. You always have to remember that you have to eat your vegetables not just your fruits. Make sure you eat 50% of you fruits and 50% of you vegetables.
Paragraph 3:
You have to make sure you exercise to keep fit. If you want some tips on how to stay fit then I have some for you. When you want to do something and your doing nothing then you can go for a walk to the beach or you can run have a swim. You can also walk on the beach or run on the beach.
Paragraph 4:
You have to stretch before you go for a run or workout at the gym then you can stretch your arms before you start or When you have a game of rugby of when you have training then you definitely need to stretch be if you don’t your get sore legs and arms.
Conclusion:
Thank you for listening to my Ideas on how to stay fit and healthy. Make sure you keep on looking on my blog to see what we have been up to in our classroom.
Share it with a buddy.
Get them to go through your writing and edit it.
Check for correct use of punctuation
Capital letters
Does it make sense? Yes
Leave positive and constructive comments
Answer the following questions:
What is this explanation about? Talking about how to keep fit and healthy.
What is the main point in paragraph one? Eating your fruits.
What is the main point in paragraph two? Eating your vegetables.
What is the main point in paragraph three? Running or walking.
What is the main point in paragraph four? Stretching.
We are learning to review what we remember in explanation writing.
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