8 "I was travelling in the 'Flying Car; when...

WALT: write a creative piece of writing.

"I was travelling in the 'Radio-Flyer; when... "

My creative writing:

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Plan your writing here:

Travelling across Australia. Fighting monsters. Shooting aliens. Going to rainbow’s end at the end. Having fun.

Start your writing here:

Title: The Flying car and the trip across Australia.


One sunny afternoon I decided to go on a trip but I didn’t know when to go how I would get and  who I would go with so I told myself should I go with mum and dad. I thought but then I told myself what if they say no but we were going anyway. But it was a long time until we went. So I finally went to ask mum but she go ask your dad so I did and you know what he said he said go ask your mum so I was like but mum said to come and ask you. When dad said yes we packed our bags and left the house. When I said wait how would we get there? Dad said that they had something in mind so I just followed them. When we got to the garage with our bags mum and dad showed me a flying car and I was like WHAT!! So off we went.

Mum and dad was thinking of where to go he said we are going to fly like a bird . I asked if we can have a trip to Australia, mum and dad  said ok let’s go. On went the flying car, off we go said dad. When mum, dad and I were in the sky I put my hands up so the air runs through my hands. When mum said OH NO!!! I thought that we had run out of gas but it wasn’t that you know was it was a ALIEN ATTACK!! dad got our alien guns out and we all started to shoot. when we defeated the alien’s we went on with our trip then mum and dad said that we are almost there but then they yelled, AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! they said and then they said AHHHHH!! We ran out of gas so we went flying down to the ground but we were lucky that there water was under us and we had a boat in the flying car so we crashed in the water and then we floated to the closest land so we could see where we were. It turns out that we were at australia but then we had to go back home because it was getting late but we said hi and goodbye to my auntie. So when we got home we thought that my friend was an alien in a mother ship but it turns out it was just my friend with a light.


Then after we saw my friend she said let’s go on another adventure to rainbow’s end so we did and it was a fun time. We went on all the rides and had fun. when we got home we told my brother and sister  all about our trip and they said OHHH!! I wanted to come too.

We are learning to write a creative piece of writing.