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How To Keep Everybody Happy.
Intro : When you walk home from school and you see somebody crying and you’re smiling try go over there and make them smile. Try and help them be happy and when their are happy start walking home again.
Idea 1 : If your mum and dad is feeling down cheer them up by putting on a funny play of play old funny photos and videos.
Idea 2 : If your teacher is feeling down help her if nobody helps her and make. Her feeling loved and happy and always smile at her.
Idea 3 : if your friends are feeling down make them happy and smile at them and play with them if nobody was with them.
Conclusion : If you listen to this adfis then your friends family and you are staying happy.
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this is great i like it and you always make me happy and all of my friends thats very nice of you to put this down well done
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